As a kid, I was always fascinated with cars. Maybe it was
because my father worked on them for a living, or maybe it was because of all
the little Hot Wheels cars I had lying around in my room, I’m not sure. As I
got older, I connected my interest in cars with my ability to do math somewhat
well and my want to know how things worked, and decided that I wanted to work
on cars for a living, like my dad. So, I declared as a Mechanical Engineering
major for college.
I am also a really big sports fan, particularly the big 4
sports in the US (Football, Baseball, Basketball, and Hockey). Being a little
kid in San Francisco, I gravitated towards the 49ers for football, the Giants
for baseball, and the Sharks for hockey. It wasn’t until I moved up to
Sacramento that I became interested in basketball. I remember when I moved up
here in 2002, the Sacramento Kings were serious contenders for the championship
that year, so I jumped onto the bandwagon. But, I would have to say my favorite
sport is Auto Racing. Whether it is NASCAR, Indy Car, Drag Racing, or some endurance
race, it doesn’t matter; if it’s on television, I will find a way to watch it.
As far as reading goes, I’ll constantly be on ESPN or
Sports Illustrated, catching up on my favorite sports teams or race car
drivers. However, I do read more than sports articles. Aside from important
college papers and not-as-important social media posts from Facebook or
whatever, I do have a few kinds of books I can read without falling asleep. I
like reading biographies or fiction that isn’t too far from reality. For
example, I was never a big fan of the Harry Potter series because it was too
far from being a real event. Perhaps it is no coincidence that my two favorite
books, Band of Brothers by Stephen Ambrose and The Art of Racing in
the Rain by Garth Stein both fall into categories of books that I can read
without falling asleep.
The first book I can really remember being interested in
was Band of Brothers. The story follows the story of the members of Easy
Company, a group of paratroopers during World War II, from their military
training all the way to the end of the war and their lives after the war. My
interest in the book came from the TV miniseries of the same name came out. My parents would try to set up the VCR to
record all of the episodes when they first came out in 2001, but because
recording stuff from TV used to be a lot more complicated than it is today, we
wound up missing one or two episodes. My parents would look for the episode
they had missed before whenever there was a marathon of all the episodes on, so
I sat down to watch with them one time. When I saw that we had the book, I took
it off the shelf, blew the dust off, and sat down to start reading the book.
The more I read it, the more interested became in it, and after I had finished
the book, I kept it in my room, and it became mine.
In High School English, one of our assignments was to
have a book to read throughout the semester, and write about it at the end of
the semester. I picked up The Art of Racing in the Rain, since I thought
from the title that it would actually be about racing. Instead, it follows one
man’s struggle with his racing career and a custody battle, comparing his life
to the difficulty of racing in the rain. Although it isn’t what I expected to
be reading about when I picked it up, it has also found its way onto my shelf.
Reading these books hasn’t really impacted the way that I
write or communicate too much. I feel that I am really straightforward when I
communicate an idea. I will usually give some background information though,
before I communicate the point. But these books did sort of change my
perception of the world. By putting it into racing terms, I learned from The
Art of Racing in the Rain that if you stay focused and don’t let in outside
distractions, you can get through the difficult parts of life. From Band of
Brothers, I gathered a similar idea; that to get to a goal, you will have
to overcome many different obstacles that will come your way.
I still see reading playing a significant part in my
future, both short-term and long-term. For my college education, being able to
read and understand formulas and equations will be just as important as reading
specifications and dimensions for designing and manufacturing a part if I want
to graduate in Mechanical Engineering. If I were to get into the auto racing
industry, there would definitely be a lot of reading to do. For example,
reading track notes and setups from previous years and similar tracks would be
an important factor in being able to set up a race car to have the best chance
to win a race.
Form #1
ReplyDeleteWriter: Andrew Mibach
Reviewer: Blake Baumgardner
1. I really enjoyed reading your experiences with the Band of Brothers book and television show as I really enjoyed the show as well and can’t wait until I get the chance to read the book.
2. A. The main point of your paper is the impact of reading on your life and your future.
B. I think your paper does an adequate job of addressing this point.
C. It also fulfills the requirements of the actual assignment.
3. Little more details to the role of reading in your life after college would be nice.
4. “Some of your paragraphs are confusing because they seem to be about more than one idea.”
5. Just as you mentioned in your writing that you are very straight forward and your narrative is straight forward, but that is one of our drawbacks as engineers when it comes to this creative writing. I am a civil engineer and I suffer the same problem. We need to expand on ideas and give them more detail or depth to give readers more insight. Also, if your narrative had a conclusion of sorts to wrap up your narrative would really improve it I think. Then combining paragraphs of similar ideas or moving around ideas to get better flow may also be an idea.